Tuesday, April 8, 2014
"Life is like a game of cards; the hand you are dealt with is determinism; the way you play it is free will." - Jawharlal Nehru. This quote means that there are many decisions you can make, but the one you choose is what you will face the consequences of. This quote is correct because of all the life decisions you make each and everyday. This can clearly be seen everyday because everyday you make different choices. Every single day you make a choice its either the right choice or the bad choice or you choose not to do any at all.
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For the first sentence, you could have said " Jawharlal Nehru once said.." and then your quote.For your 3rd sentence you should have given more of an explanation, like give more details explaining what your are stating.You also forgot to mention your book in the 4th sentence, In your last sentence for your thesis, you should have written 3 points from your book that are examples of free will.
ReplyDeleteYou explained your quote really well, and good job using 3rd person. you didn't talk about your book at all , and you didn't have 3 main point. But overall you did a really good job.
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